最难缠钉子户
发表于 2011-1-18 15:40:24
Welcome brother!
最难缠钉子户
发表于 2011-1-18 17:52:12
Moreover, news media plays an important role in instilling high moral values by reporting incidents with good or bad examples.
I confuse that whether the accusative could be omitted or not. If I write that maybe is:
Moreover, news media plays an important role in instilling high moral values into people by reporting incidents with good or bad examples.
revealing scandals It seems like a good word
However, news media could have negative effects as well
how many people will be interested in the contents
is more and more crucial in contemporary society
"is" I confuse if use "are"???
increasingly might be better
Summarily, in terms of vocabulary. This essay is wonderful...at least I feel that, because I have learnt lots of vocabularies from your essay. And other things, there are a few grammar mistakes in this essay.
Keep it, I believe you can reach your target. I have to admit that you are better than me.
振雄山庄
发表于 2011-1-19 01:52:31
改后版： 好吧其实是我随笔涂涂的。。。不好别打我 = =
It is widely believed that the information provided by media, regardless of based on paper such as newspapers, or based on technology such as television, radio and internet, has a tremendous impact on people’s daily lives. Whether the impact is benefit or not has resulted in controversial discussions recently. In my opinion, the advantages of this phenomenon overweigh its disadvantages when taken a closer look.
Generally, most of the news delivered by media is proved to be accurate and instant, which benefits both individuals and society. For of all, we are living in an information era. And for the human beings today, it has become part of human nature to be curious about what is happening this minute everywhere in the world. Secondly, highly influenced by news media, our decisions everyday are made more or less based on the information provided. From as major as a business decision on whether or not to sell a stock to as simple as whether we should bring an umbrella, our lives are driven by the information. Moreover, news media plays an important role in setting up moral values by paying respect to the heroes and criticizing the villains. Our society needs good discipline, and news media promotes it in a mellow and non-offensive way. Revealing scandals like corruption also helps to monitor and boost efficiency in government behaviours.
However, news media could have negative effect as well. Some news could be over-exaggerated, misleading or even falsified. As a large proportion of news media companies are money driven, they may only care about making the content appealing to the public, even though the truth says otherwise. People may end up misjudging the situation after receiving wrong information. Nevertheless, as we are living in an open-minded society, there will be various voices on the same event with different opinions. Grownups are responsible for their own judgments, and they will know which source to trust by time. The truth will be revealed in due time.
In conclusion, news media, as a way of delivering information, is more and more crucial in contemporary society. This is an irreversible trend and people will continue to benefit from it.
最难缠钉子户
发表于 2011-1-19 09:42:29
Em...In my view, you should ... express things in English ,because you will attend IELTS test soon... try it I advised. It also benefit your speaking. As your time is not enough to improve your English. But you could become accustomed to use English.
your comment is correct. But I think I could come up with. GO GO!
By the way. I never think I'll fail this competition.
最难缠钉子户
发表于 2011-1-19 11:24:52
555, me too."华东师大"in Shanghai. 3/19
You can do this! I believe!
最难缠钉子户
发表于 2011-1-19 20:41:19
To some extent, I'm keen to watch your essay. I believe I'll learn much via that.
wnig7851
发表于 2011-1-20 06:01:09
不能玩呀~送符咒语给你~~
想玩的时候拿出来瞧瞧~~
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最难缠钉子户
发表于 2011-1-20 06:53:19
Hugely Give Power
zz25hujevp
发表于 2011-1-20 13:10:00
shan同学真是越来越渐入佳境了，以这样的毅力和进步的速度，再提高下语法，4个7真是指日可待了。看来我也要实行跟楼主一样的策略了，加油！
最难缠钉子户
发表于 2011-1-20 20:29:09
The nineteenth essay
Some people believe individuals are more important in taking care of environment, others thinks governments should be major responsible to it. Discuss and give your opinion.
Answer:
As environmental problems have become increasingly grievous in this day and age, people start to argue that whether individuals or governments should make efforts to improve those.
No doubt that, individuals' efforts always play the vital role in improving environmental problems. First and foremost, every people could easier to do that segregating wasts that cannot break down or decompose from garbage which can be recycled thereby reducing environmental pollution. Futhermore, people could refuse to use some disposable things for the sake of relieving the strain for natural resources. For instance, people could choose papery bags or shopping bags to replace plastic bags. Additionally, vehicle always cause severe air pollution as a vast deal with exhaust would be discharged to air by them. So car ownerships could opt for public transportation instead of driving their cars.
Similarly, governments are also important in combatting environmental issues. Because, they have power to restrict or even ban some detrimental phenomena or behaviour, which would aggravate environmental pollution. For example, Cachous have been ban in some countries as they are hardly to be cleared and seriously pollute surrounding. Moreover, some manufactories drain effluent sewage directly into the river and continue to emit a large quantities of poisonous gas to the air. In terms of this, individuals are helpless but governments could take measure to tackle these kind of ploblems. Contrarily, governments could not order individuals to improve environment compulsorily, that must depend on individuals' own awareness.
In conclusion, governments and individuals all have duties to improve environment. More precisely, both should make a concerted effort to combat environmental problems.